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In the end who will be there?
Friends stay but do they really care?
And while I stand there and stare at despair
I realize there’s nothing that I can repair
Perhaps I didn’t fight hard enough
Or maybe I did?
Or maybe I’m delusional
Or I’m just a kid
It’s amazing how reality comes in at its pace
As soon as it’s gone you’ve been slapped in the face
The fires of war and the fires of hell
The force of the wind causing the hurricanes spell
The ice and the rain and the hail and sleet
The earth cracks open and it digs you in deep
And as I keep going were will I be?
My loved ones all dying is all that I see
But still I stand here grasping what I have
The last parting gift to me from my dad
The cities are burning and bombs setting off
You know that you’ll die when you inhale and cough
What else can I feel?
Nothing but sorrow
Knowing that today won’t have a tomorrow
Knowing that today that i'm all alone
There’s no wear to run
Not even home
So in my last dying breath
My last desperation
I see that now
I have no salvation
©2008-2009 ~bloodseer
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WHEW! dat was off da hook!
spanks XDDD

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Dynasty is my life
walk with or
walk away
thank you :D

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Dynasty is my life
walk with or
walk away
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Powerful bit of writing dear. Seriously. I love it.

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I am RANDOM. I am strange. I like water buffaloes.

Let's do the Time Warp again. And whatever you do, DON'T PANIC!
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im capable of writing strong things but i dont always like to so as to not be made fun of and stuff i mean i didnt even know if i wanted to put these 2 up thanks :glomp:

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Dynasty is my life
walk with or
walk away
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I wouldn't worry about being made fun of. Your stuff is good, so it won't be made fun of anyway. xDD

:glomp:

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I am RANDOM. I am strange. I like water buffaloes.

Let's do the Time Warp again. And whatever you do, DON'T PANIC!

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